I have been known to have dyslexia from time to time, so correct me if I’m wrong, but there is no C in m.2 on beats 2 & 3. I don’t find it too difficult, but if that would be a problem when I submit it to the site then I will make it easier. This would give you the feel of the original without any repeated notes.” I suggest, for, say, m2, removing the C in the chord on beat 2 and 3 and having the chord on b2.5 just be the C. “Those repeated LH chords on b2 of every measure aren't that playable. I’m honestly not to sure what’s going on there. “I'm not sure tremeloes are the best approximation for what the LH is doing in m11-17.” I have to listen to it again, but I usually have a hard time picking out notes with my ears. The bass guitar hits the same notes every time in m3 and similar, and does some really interesting stuff in m9-10 that you just left out.” “The bassline in m3-10 isn't really like you wrote it at all. I wasn’t sure how I should label that those notes should be played with the right hand. I just left it out ‘cause it’s natural for me when I’m playing to cover the notes that my right hand can’t cover with my left hand and vice versa. It’s supposed to be played by both hands (r.h. “LH chords at the end of m6 and m22 aren't playable at all.” There's more going on here (and not just 3rds).ĭaily Life also desperately needs proper note beaming as well.Įdit: remove the spaces around the = in your signature to make the links function properly When things speed up, the RH is not just octaves here. Pretty sure there's always something going on in the LH, not sure why there's a few measures of rests. I'm positive the harmonies are not just 3rds all the way through the first page. Since there's no 2nd layer rests, it's impossible to tell what beat that quarter note is actually on since it's spaced the same as the half notes in m14. Everything is so crammed that it ruins the spacing. Maybe incorporate more of the drums into the LH? It would make it more interesting to play.įor the love of notation, please please space your measures out further.

There is never a moment of silence in the original, so I don't know why you would have one here. Check out this thread and tell me if you need a longer explanation:Īlso, please tie the half notes to whole notes in the empty measures. There's more stuff in between m19 and 26 than you have written. This would give you the feel of the original without any repeated notes. Those repeated LH chords on b2 of every measure aren't that playable. I'm not sure tremeloes are the best approximation for what the LH is doing in m11-17. LH chords at the end of m6 and m22 aren't playable at all. The bass guitar hits the same notes every time in m3 and similar, and does some really interesting stuff in m9-10 that you just left out. The bassline in m3-10 isn't really like you wrote it at all. Some spontaneous, non-all-encompassing feedback:

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